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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart displays information about households’ income in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, it shows the same trend for every year, which is 100,000
dollars
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 or more always being the highest and 75,000-99,999
dollars
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 becoming the least, except in 2011. In 2007, almost 30
million
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 households had an income of 100,000
dollars
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 or more, followed by 25,000-49,999
dollars
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; less than 25,000
dollars
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; 50,000-74,999
dollars
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; and 75,000-99,999
dollars
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 as the lowest number, with amounts of
people
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 about 27, 25, 21, and 14, respectively. The trend was pretty similar in 2015, with 33
million
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people
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 having 100,000
dollars
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 or more as the biggest number compared to every year, and the lowest was the same as
2007
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in 2007
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.
Conversely
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, in 2011, the highest number of households’ income was 25,000-49,999
dollars
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 about 30
million
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people
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 earning
this
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.
Then
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, the trend continued with less than 25,000
dollars
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;
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,
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 100,000
dollars
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 or more
;
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,
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 50,000-74,999
dollars
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;
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,
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 and 75,000-99,999
dollars
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;
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 with 27, 26, 21, and 13
million
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people
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 having it.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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