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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverlkess. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweugh the disadvantages?

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vihicles
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vehicles
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becaome
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become driverless
driverlkess
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vehicles
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.
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 essay agrees that the
advantges
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advantages
 of
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driverlkess
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driverless
vehicles
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outweugh
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outweigh
 the
disadvatges
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disadvantages
. On the one hand,
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driverlkess
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driverless
vehicles
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 have several benefits.
Firstly
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,
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driverlkess
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driverless
 help
people
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 to drive
for
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a
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apply
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long distances without
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 tired.
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this
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 is because the
passengars
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passengers
 do not need to control the car.
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, it will help disabled
people
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 to travel without needing help
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 others.
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, they can drive because of that the
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 system in the car
it
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is
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 helpful for them.
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, there is one disadvantage in
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vehicles
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 that drive without a driver. It is risky because any time the system
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it
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 will be a disaster for the
passngers
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passengers
.
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, the cars or buses that
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are drving
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drving
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driving
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is
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 dangerous because a small mistake in the system can
threats
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passngers
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passngers'
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life
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. In conclusion,
this
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 essay agrees that the
advantges
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advantages
 are more
that
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than
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 the
desadvantges
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disadvantages
.
the
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The
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advatges
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advantages
such
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 as
traviling
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travelling
 for long hours
withou
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without
 getting tired and
help
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helping
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 disabled
people
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 to travel
with out
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without
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geeting
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getting
 any help.
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However
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 the
disadvantges
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disadvantages
such
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as
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that
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 it is dangerous for the
people
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task response
Plan before writing. State your view in the first line and keep it in every paragraph.
task response
Give 2-3 clear ideas and add a simple example for each idea.
language
Fix spelling and grammar. Check common words like driverless, passengers, system, risk.
content
The writer shows a clear view that agrees with the statement.
structure
There is an attempt to compare sides with 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand'.
coherence
Some points exist about long travel and help for disabled people.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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