Due to
the evolution of medicine, people from all over the world are now living much longer than before. I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages since an experienced society is more important than one where money or the economy matters more. Linking Words
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is why one point in Linking Words
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, and
the
wealth they cost.
Old people are gaining more and more importance in many countries latelyVerb problem
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this
is the result of advances in medicine. These individuals bring to our society an experienced point of view Linking Words
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I lived in a town surrounded by old-age individuals Punctuation problem
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their stories and experiences have helped me make better decisions.
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, a disadvantage is the money Linking Words
this
part of the population costs the state and the government. Given their advanced Linking Words
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they no longer work, so they do not contribute economic wealth to the country. Add a comma
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In addition
, the state pays them pensions during their old age so that they can have some money to live on. Linking Words
For example
, a study carried out by the University of Economics of Madrid states that pensions for the elderly represent an expense twice as high as that of education in Spain.
In conclusion, even if it costs the government a lot to support older people, the fact that they can help with their experience makes the disadvantage much smaller.Linking Words