the charts shows the expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010

The bar chart illustrates how much consumers in
France
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and the
UK
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spent on five categories of goods in 2010, with figures given in pounds sterling.
Overall
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, the
UK
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recorded higher expenditure than
France
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in four out of the five categories, most notably on books and cameras,
whereas
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France
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spent more only on perfume. In both countries, cars accounted for the greatest proportion of consumer spending. Looking first at car purchases, spending was high in both nations. British consumers spent approximately £450,000,
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the figure for
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was slightly lower at around £400,000. A similar level of expenditure is observed for computers,
although
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France
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marginally outspent the
UK
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, at roughly £380,000 compared with £350,000.
In contrast
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, the
UK
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spent considerably more on books, with expenditure reaching about £400,000, exceeding
France
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’s total of around £300,000. An even larger gap can be seen in camera sales, where British spending stood at approximately £350,000, more than double the French figure of about £150,000.
By comparison
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, perfume was the only category in which
France
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led, spending close to £200,000,
while
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the
UK
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allocated a lower amount of roughly £150,000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • spending
  • money
  • country
  • two
  • 2010
  • on
  • goods
  • daily
  • items
  • more
  • less
  • big
  • share
  • part
  • food
  • clothes
  • home
  • transport
  • income
  • price
  • reason
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overall
  • data
  • chart
  • figure
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