The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

The table illustrates the trends about how much fast
food
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eaten
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is eaten
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in Melbourne for three
years
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from 2005, present, and 2025.
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, it can clearly be seen that the number of
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food
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foods
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varies among categories and
years
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. The two types that contribute much are
hamburger
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hamburgers
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and fried chicken. The hamburger consumption
have
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a little fluctuation,
while
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the amount of fried chicken consumed
rise
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rises
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over the given period. In terms of the
food
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type that
have
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a large portion, hamburger started at 40.
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, it
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to 38 in the present time. In 2025, the
hamberger
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hamburger
projected
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to grow by 13 to 51. Meanwhile, the fried chicken accounted for 35 in the first
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years
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year
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and
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slightly to 37. In 2025, it
predicted
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will increase to 45. Regarding the other three
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food
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foods
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, there are salad, fried rice and noodles. In 2005, salad only reached 5, but
then
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significantly
soar
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to 15 and
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is forecasted
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it
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will grow to 41 in 2025.
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, the fried rice and noodles
consumption
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apply
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only hit around 6-9 over the
years
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. For 2025, the fried rice will remain the same as before
and
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, and
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noddles
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will have a
little
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slight
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increased
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by
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "trends" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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