The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table depicts the expenditure on three different goods in five different countries in the year 2002.
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, Sweden accounted for all categories lower
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, beverages made up the highest trend in Turkey,
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Spain allocated money
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education less among other sectors and countries.
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with, Ireland spent money on nourishing products,
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as drinks , snacks and tobacco, representing
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28.91%. Whilst
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clothing constituted slightly less, 6.43%.
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. Ireland residents allocated money for vacations and tuition.
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households
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spend less than the Irish population did
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food and drinks made up 16.36%. Meanwhile, leisure activity is triple that of clothing, accounting for roughly 3.20 and 9%. Spain and Sweden
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slightly similar rates, 18.8% and 15.77%, respectively.
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, footwear represented 6.51% and 5.4%.
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, Sweden made up 3 times more percentages, resulting in
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3.22% and 1.98%, in turn. Turkey showed the highest rate in terms of drinks and meals,
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made up 32.14%.
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clothing was relatively more than leisure and education, 6.63% and 4.35%, respectively

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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