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The bar chart shows the distribution of YouTube users worldwide as of January 2023 by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the distribution of YouTube users worldwide as of January 2023 by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of YouTube
users
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 across six different
age
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 groups in the first month of 2023, measured in percentages.
Overall
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, people aged 25–34 accounted for the largest proportion of
users
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,
whereas
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 those aged 55–64 represented the smallest share. In general, YouTube usage was higher among younger
age
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 groups and declined with
age
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. Looking first at younger
users
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, the 25–34
age
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 group recorded the highest figure at 20%.
This
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 was followed by individuals aged 18–24 and 35–44, both of which accounted for 16% of total
users
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. The 45–54 group
also
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 made up a notable proportion, standing at 12%.
By contrast
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, older
users
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 were less represented. People aged 65 and above accounted for approximately 9%,
while
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 the 55–64
age
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 group had the lowest percentage, at just 8%. Together, these figures indicate a clear downward trend in YouTube usage as
age
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 increases.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words users, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age group
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • user base
  • demographic
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • trend
  • mid-range
  • teenagers
  • young adults
  • middle-aged adults
  • elderly adults
  • global implications
  • marketers
  • content creators
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