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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the visual media like photographs and films are considered more powerful than written
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. I agree with
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 believe that written words still play an important role in
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 ideas. One reason
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 are so effective is their emotional impact. A single photograph or
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 film of something tragic can instantly provoke feelings of sadness, fear or empathy, often more strongly than a written description. Visuals allow people to connect emotionally without taking much time, making them very influential in news, advertising, and social media. Another advantage of
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 is their universality,unlike the written
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,
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 can be understood by people with different cultural and linguistic
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.
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imges
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images
 can
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transmit
 information quickly.
For example
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, an infographic can
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summarise
 data more efficiently than a written report
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, written communication
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is still
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 important, particularly when details,depth and precision are needed. Words allow ideas to be explained in
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detail and give a context,
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 can
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 be false, taken out of context,
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 can distort the reality of
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. In conclusion,
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 have become
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a more
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 powerful tool for communication
due to
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 their emotional impact, speed, and the most
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, the universality, they can not replace written
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. The most effective communication way is
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to combine
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 both, using the
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 to capture the attention and words to describe or to transmit the meaning.

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task
Make your main points clear in one line each and add a stronger example.
coherence
Work on the flow in each part. Use simple links like 'first', 'then', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'in conclusion'.
language
Check grammar and spelling so the meaning is not lost.
task
You show a clear view and say you agree.
coherence
You give reasons for your view with some examples.
organization
You end with a short conclusion that repeats your view.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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