The graph shows radio and television audiences of the United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of

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United Kingdom citizens

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who used the

radio

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and television

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24 hours in 1992.

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, it can be seen that both

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and TV had a considerable variation throughout the day. The number of

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audience at 1 a.

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. was nearly under 5 per

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, it remained stable

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the next 5 hours. From 6

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number

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of

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users increased sharply to a quarter and

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percentage fell to about 10 by 3 p.

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. Despite some fluctuations, it followed a downward trend, so

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by the end of the day, it dropped to 5 per

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. The quantity of TV audience in the beginning was just above 5 per

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before falling

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slightly

to 3 per

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by the next hour and

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following the same pattern as

radio

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until 6 a.

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. The figure kept rising before the slight drop to 3 per

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. After that, it expanded dramatically

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its peak just under a half at 9 p.

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. Toward the end of the day, it declined sharply to 15 per

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