The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007

The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
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per person in 4 countries over a
period
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of forty years
from
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1967 to 2007.
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United Kingdom had the highest carbon
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,
while
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Portugal had the lowest
emissions
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at the beginning of the
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.
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, Italy and Portugal experienced significant growth by the end of the
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. In 1967, the United Kingdom recorded the highest carbon dioxide
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at almost 11 metric
tons
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, followed by Sweden at around 8.5
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, Italy at approximately 4
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, and Portugal at around 1.5
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. Over the following years, the
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of Italy and Portugal increased sharply, and
this
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upward trend
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continued
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throughout the
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. In 1988, both Sweden and Italy had the same
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emissions
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around 7 metric
tons
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, after which Italy continued to increase
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Sweden declined. Meanwhile, the United Kingdom peaked in 1977 before gradually decreasing
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remained the highest per capita by the end of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, period, tons with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • per capita
  • environmental impact
  • trend analysis
  • industrialization
  • energy consumption
  • greenhouse gases
  • sustainable development
  • emission reduction
  • technological innovation
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • economic growth
  • climate change
  • environmental policy
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