The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures illustrate how the fabric is made from
bamboo
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.
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, there are nine steps starting from planting
bamboo
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,
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and ending with producing the clothes ready for consumers. In the first step, the
bamboo
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is planted in
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and harvested in
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the fall
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once it has fully grown. The harvested
bamboo
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is
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cut into strips and crushed to make liquid pulp. After that, they get filtered to separate long fibres from the liquid. The water and amine oxide are added to soften fibres. In the final stage , from
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to
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, pictures show that the threads become yarns and
woven
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are woven
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to make fabrics.
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,
finally
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, the clothing products are created to be in the store for purchase.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bamboo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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