You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you have chosen your friend to go with you

Dear Sue, Receive my greetings. It's my sincere hope that you are doing great

as well as

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enjoying

this

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holiday that

fell

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falls

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the winter season. How is everything over there?

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I am

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interrupting the normal chats via other social media platforms to break

good

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the good

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news to you. Guess what? Do you remember the charity sweepstake game that we used to play at the cinema hall? I just received a call and an email from their marketing manager that I am one of the winners of two tickets and $2000. The tickets are supposed to be used at the Kimbi festival held

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London, which happens once annually every December 15th and

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last

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for two days. I know you are a

fun

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fan

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of Rihana and she will be the main

guest

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guest,

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although

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apply

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both local and international guests will be present. The musicians celebrate the day the state endorsed their music as

career

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a career

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and boosted their growth. For the

last

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five

years

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we have struggled together to purchase tickets for

this

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event

and

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now that we are lucky to have

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also

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apply

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the pocket money, I believe it will be the greatest time for you as it

also

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falls on your

birth day

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birthday

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. Lemme know about the colour code for the day once you see the email as we only have two weeks to prepare. Bye and cheers. Yours in love Jane

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Feb 3, 2026

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task response

Task response: The letter gives details on the concert, says how you won the tickets, and why you pick your friend. Some facts are not clear or exact. Add more clear facts about the event and keep a warm, simple tone.

coherence

Coherence and cohesion: The flow is a bit soft. Use a clear order: opening, the news, details of the event, how you won, why you invite, and a clear close. Use easy linking words like also, then, because to join ideas.

task response

You get the main idea fast and the reader sees the news.

coherence

You show a real reason to invite your friend by the idea of your shared time and the birthday plan.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

229 words

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city
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we
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