the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant

The two maps illustrate the difference in the
City
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Hospital layout between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the layout had significantly different changes between Ring
Road
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and
City
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Road
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. The
car
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park
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for the public and staff was increased to provide more space for parking.
Also
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, a bus station was constructed on the opposite
side
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of the
car
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park
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. On the northern
side
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, the hospital building remained in the same place and was surrounded by the Ring
Road
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. On the right-hand
side
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of the
City
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Hospital, separated from the original
car
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park
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, which was mixed for staff and public use, a new
car
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park
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was built for public use.
In addition
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, one roundabout was constructed at the intersection of Ring
Road
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and Hospital
Road
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. On the southern
side
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,
similarly
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to the northern
side
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, a roundabout was constructed at the intersection of
City
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Road
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and Hospital
Road
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. Between the southern and northern roundabouts, a new bus station was built to the west of Hospital
Road
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. On the opposite
side
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of the bus station, a
car
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park
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for staff was reconstructed.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, car, park, side with synonyms.
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