The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph gives information about the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Overall
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the three ways of inquiry exhibited different trends over the given period, two followed an upward trajectory,
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the other one showed a decline.
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, the rates of increase and decrease varied significantly between them. As the graph shows, in
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stood at slightly over 400 in January, and rose steadily to around 800 in February,
subsequently
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grew dramatically to almost 1900 by June. Followed by telephone, it began at nearly 900 in January,
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dropped moderately to 800 in February,
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increased rapidly to just 1000 in March and remained unchanged until April, before climbing drastically to 1600 by June.
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, by letter/email commenced at slightly under 800 in January,
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fell slowly to just above 300
at the end
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of the period.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • Overall trend
  • Sharp increase
  • Gradual decline
  • Peak
  • Fluctuation
  • Outnumbered
  • Dominated
  • In-person inquiries
  • By telephone
  • By letter/email
  • Correspondence
  • Interpersonal
  • Communication method
  • Popularity
  • Comparison
  • Tourism season
  • Visitor engagement
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