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The bar chart below shows the main reasons for students choosing to study at a particular university in the Uk in 1985 and 2005.

The bar chart illustrates the main
purposes
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reasons
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 why students
selecting
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selected
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 to study at a particular university in the UK in 1985 and 2005.
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, students have
choosen
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chosen
 more teaching qualities, less
prefered
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prefer
 the resources. In 1985, students chose the teaching qualities just about 22 %, and it was followed by a considerable rise to 26 % in 2005. The
sport
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 facilities in 1985
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apply
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 started at just 12 %, and
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 was followed by a
notably grow
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 to 27 % in 2005. Reasons for choosing the university the degree programs were levelled
of
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over two decades. The
proxomity
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proximity
 to home rose
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noticeably
 in 1985, but
then
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 dropped to 10 % in 2005. The resources started at just 15 % in 1985, a figure that
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drop
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 to 11 % in 2005.

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