The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.

The given
vissual
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visual
illustrates the manufacturing
proccess
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process
of
paper
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production and
recycling
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the recycling stage.
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, the plantation to
paper
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start
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in the radiata pine thinnings. These are cut down to be penetrated
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the de-barking drum. Later, it is placed into the chipper machine where the
peaces
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are chipped.
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, the thermomechanical refiner is used in order to
humid
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the substance. At
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, the long sheet is
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placed
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on the
paper
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making machine.
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, the
paper
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is converted
in to
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newsprint. Later on, the recycling part
which
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is
paper
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to
paper
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, begins with inserting the
peaces
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of kerbside collection
in
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to after collection. And
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, de-incing removes the
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. After the cleaning and fine screening
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the
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material is
being
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mixed with water
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inside
of
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the thermomechanical and recycled pulp mix
and
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, and
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the recycling concludes. The cycle continues like
this
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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