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Writing Samples
Band 3

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this argument.

There is no denying the fact that online
books
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 and
newspaper
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newspapers
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invaded
Verb problem
have invaded
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 the world these
day
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days
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.
While
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 it is a commonly held belief that real
books
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 will stop
published
Verb problem
being published
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 in the future and the online
one
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ones
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 will be free, there
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also
Verb problem
is also
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 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that
stop
Correct article usage
the stop
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 selling
books
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 is coming inevitably.
To begin
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 with,
printing
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the printing
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 process required a lot of effort, money and time.
In other words
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, it is a long journey starting with
prepare
Wrong verb form
preparing
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 ink and ending with arranging paper.
In addition
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, the process of delivering newspapers and
book
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books
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 to
customer
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customers
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 requires
deal
Replace the word
dealing
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 with delivery companies.
For example
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, Oxford University published a paper
stated
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stating
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 that the refund coming from selling
books
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 is just 10%
from
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of
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 the
whole
Correct word choice
full
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 price. Another point to consider is that
,
Punctuation problem
apply
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 online
books
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 just
required
Wrong verb form
require
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 your own computer and internet . It is
also
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 possible to say that there
is
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are
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 no heavy losses if the book
failer
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fails
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.
Moreover
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, each person can write without
any deal
Wrong verb form
dealing
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 with newspapers,
that
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which
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 may
restricting
Wrong verb form
restrict
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him
Correct pronoun usage
them
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.
For instance
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, if the writer does not find the chance to express his idea, he can use any platform to publish his
books
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 and views. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that the online book will increase the number of writers in the whole world. As the awareness of reading and writing will be
trend
Correct article usage
a trend
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.

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grammar
Fix verb tenses and sentence form. Many sentences are not complete or have wrong tense.
lexical
Use simple, accurate word choice. Some phrases are wrong or odd, like 'invaded' or 'refund'.
content
Give clear and real examples to back up your view. Do not rely on weak or unclear data.
coherence
Link ideas with clear transitions and keep paragraphs about one idea. Use the intro, two body parts, and a conclusion.
stance
The writer states a clear view about the future of books.
structure
Some linking phrases are used to show the order of ideas.
content
There is an effort to discuss both sides of the topic.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tangible experience
  • nostalgia
  • collectibles
  • digital decay
  • permanence
  • subscription model
  • paywall
  • data preservation
  • e-waste
  • sensory pleasure
  • exclusive content
  • digital divide
  • hardware obsolescence
  • sustainable practices
  • historical record
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