You and your friend have booked tickets to go to the theatre. You are now unable to go but have found another friend to accompany him/her instead. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter, •explain why you can not go to the theatre with your friend •say who can go instead of you •tell them why you think this person would be good to go with

Dear Samantha, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
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letter to inform you that I am unable to join you for
the
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Saturday's
movie
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. I am extremely sorry that I cancelled my plan
last
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minute. Actually, I received a call from my doctor's
clinique
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, they said that my daughter is scheduled for
routine
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a routine
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health
check up
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on the same day.
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, I need to drop my
movie
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plan, and I must take Anya to the doctor.
However
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, I do not want to ruin
you
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weekend and discard
movie
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tickets.
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I could not go with you, I decided to
asked
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another friend of mine to give you company. Tina is an amazing and jolly lady.
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, she has
same
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the same
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taste in
the
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films
like
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as
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us
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we
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.
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I believe she would be a perfect
movie
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partner for you because she is
also
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a Shahrukh's fan. Once again, I
appologies
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apologise
for changing the plans. I promise
to
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you, I
would
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will
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go with you
on
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next weekend. I am looking forward
hearing
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to hearing
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from you. Give my
reagards
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regards
to your parents! With regards, Reem Sheikh

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order
Try to have one idea per paragraph. Start with why you cannot go, then a small plan, then a kind end.
grammar
Check small errors like 'clinic' and 'apologize' to be clear.
tone
Keep a warm and kind tone. This makes you sound like a true friend.
content
You tell why you cannot go and who will go in your place.
tone
You show a kind note and wish to keep plans.
format
Greeting and closing are in place.
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