The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodations in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.

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chart compares the proportion of families living in owned and rented

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housing

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england

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England

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and

wales

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from 1918 to 2011.

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, rented houses were the most common situation for families between 1918 and 1961 in both nations,

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owned

accomodations

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were the most popular after 1971.

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, both categories showed exactly the same percentage in 1971. A detailed look at the graph clearly shows that in 1918

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75% families

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in rented houses, before experiencing a

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trend in the following years and

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just over 30% by 2021

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, it rose slightly by the end of the period, reaching approximately 35%.

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, households owned properties showed the opposite trend

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it was gradually increased within the same period of

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started with just over 20% in 1918 to

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the highest peak at approximately 69% by 2011.

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, both categories recorded the same proportion in 1971 at exactly half of the households.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodations in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.

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In many countries, the age of the criminal is getting lower. Give the reasons for and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant examples.

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