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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

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The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of
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the world
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world
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world's
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forest
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forests
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 in 5 different regions.
Overall
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, at the beginning of the
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, Africa accounted for the highest proportion of the regions,
whereas
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 Asia contributed the least. By the end of the
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, North America emerged as the dominant region,
while
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 Africa recorded the lowest share. As the charts
shows
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, South America
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accounted
 for 16% and grew rapidly to reach 23%, the second highest one, at
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then
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 end of the
period
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. Europe stood at 18%,
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 increased slowly to 20%.
By contrast
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, Africa began at 27%, hitting the highest
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, before dropping drastically to 9%, ending at its lowest
point
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.
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, Asia started at 14%, hitting the lowest
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, and rose moderately to 18%. Regarding North America, it commenced at 25%.
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, maintained an upward trend, ending at 30% its highest
point
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at the end
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 of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, point with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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