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The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

These maps show the layout of
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the sport
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sport
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sports
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 facilities of
university
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the university
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 in 1990 and
present
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the present
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 plan.
Overall
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,
Some
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some
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 modifications and some
replacement
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 for these facilities
happens
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happen
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on
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in
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 these
filed
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fields
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. The outdoor
pool
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 has changed to
indoor
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an indoor
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pool
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. The location of
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tennis
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the tennis
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court
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 has changed to
other
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another
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 place. The significant change was the replacement of
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park
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the park
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 with
basketball
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a basketball
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court
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. Regarding 1990, the two
tennis
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 courts were in the south-east of the map. There was a car
park
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 in
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the south-west
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south-west
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southwest
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 of the layouts. The Reception and cafe
located
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are located
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 in the
center
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centre
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 of
layout
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the layout
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. The
pool
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 in the north-east of the map
used
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is used
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 as
outdoor
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an outdoor
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pool
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. In the present time, some changes and
replacement
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replacements
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 take happens. The
park
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 has
replaced
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been replaced
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 by
basketball
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a basketball
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court
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. The location of
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tennis
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the tennis
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court
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 has changed
into
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to
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the
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a
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 place of car
park
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 and two
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tennis
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additional tennis
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court
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courts
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has
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have
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 been added. The cafe and reception have remained in the same location as before. The
pool
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 has changed
it's
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its
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 usage to
indoor
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an indoor
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pool
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. The changing room in the south of
outdoor
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the outdoor
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pool
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 has expanded and has become more spacious. The fitness centre has
replaced
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been replaced
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 with
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tennis
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a tennis
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court
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pool, tennis, court, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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