You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for a swimming lessons at your community sports center. You want to find out more about these lessons. write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In the letter mention. Describe how well you can swim at the moment Explain, explain why you want to learn to swim better Inquire about the time and the cost of swimming lessons

Dear Sir, I am Kanishka, and I have noticed an advertisement in the newspaper about the swimming classes provided by your sports centre. I am curious to learn how to swim

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so long and, before that, I would like to get some details about the classes. My purpose in learning swimming is that I am planning to participate in an annual swimming competition

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will take place in the next six months. I want to get training to compete in it. I am already at a beginner level, and I want to practice and upgrade my level to become eligible to take part in the competition. I certainly want

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information about the timings and the batch you can include me in. I want to practice in my own age group (I am 15). Please consider these details and

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inform me about the cost of these lessons. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Kanishka

narangkanishka90

Feb 8, 2026

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coherence

Make each paragraph hold one idea. Some sentences here talk about two ideas.

structure

Start with a clear aim in the first paragraph, then give details in the next.

style

Use simple words and short sentences to keep the tone formal.

task

Ask directly for the timing and cost, and say how soon you want to start.

language

Check small grammar, like 'for so long' should be 'for a long time'.

content

Clear purpose stated for learning swimming.

format

Polite closing with 'Yours sincerely'.

content

It asks for timings, batch, and cost.

content

Gives age 15 and asks for age group.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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