Write a letter to the service provider. In your letter: •Explain what the appointment was and when it was scheduled •Describe what mistake occurred that caused you to miss it •Say what you would like the service provider to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with my missed

visa

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appointment

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due to

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your staff's negligence. I am planning to visit the USA for my brother's marriage and have scheduled an

appointment

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for my US

visa

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at the US

visa

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consulate in Vancouver on 7th February 2026.

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after my constant communication with an agent at your agency, my flight tickets were not booked to Vancouver for my

visa

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appointment

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Furthermore

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, a day before the

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, I tried calling and emailing the agent to confirm if my tickets were booked.

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,my calls and emails were ignored ,and

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never replied

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I emailed the consulate explaining the situation and requesting assistance with rescheduling the unattended

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. The consulate agreed to reschedule the missed

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at an extra cost. I do understand that mistakes happen.

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, I hope that you would reschedule my US

visa

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for next month at your own expense. I am looking forward to working with you during my next trip. Yours faithfully, John Doe

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Feb 9, 2026

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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