The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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data on the most liked social media platforms between 2011 and 2013.
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, the majority showed an increasing trend,
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as Twitter, LinkedIn, Google+, and Pinterest. The only
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that had decreased by the end was Facebook. Twitter was the most liked platform out of the ones that rose. It started with 21% in 2011 and went up by 2% each
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, reaching 25% in 2013. Next up was LinkedIn, with a 5% growth throughout the period.
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, Google+ was the channel that differed the most. Starting with a low of 5% and going up by 9%, reaching 14% by the end of the time frame.
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but not least, Pinterest was the
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with the least change. It started with 5% and even though it went up by only 1% in
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, by the end it reached 8%. Facebook had a very steady
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trend. Starting off strong with 59% in 2011,
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by 10% in
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and
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later it had gone down by 11% reaching as low as 38%.
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, it managed to be the most
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platform throughout the timeframe despite being the only
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that fell.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words one, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • trend
  • popularity
  • social media channel
  • data
  • overview
  • rise
  • decline
  • shift
  • platform
  • distribution
  • user preference
  • notable
  • significant change
  • comparison
  • highlight
  • survey
  • analysis
  • demographics
  • year-on-year change
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