The two maps illustrate the external and internal changes in the design of a health centre that happened from 2005 until the present day

The maps provide key information about the external and internal changes in the design of a health centre that happened from 2005 until now.
Overall
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, it is clear from the plan that the health centre became more developed and organised over time, with the addition of several modern facilities and a clear layout.
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what is shown in the first plan, there were only 12 spaces for car parking. There was a centre surrounded by trees. On the
right
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side
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of the entrance, there were two consulting rooms.
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, there was a physiotherapy
room
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in the
right
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corner. On the left
side
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, there were a consulting
room
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and an office. In the new map, 30 car parking spaces have been added,
in addition
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to several consultation rooms. It is noticeable that the entrance was relocated to the left
side
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. From the entrance, there
were
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a reception desk and a children's play area. On the
right
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side
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, there were four consulting rooms next to each other. The physiotherapy
room
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remained unchanged in the corner. On the left
side
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, the office remained in its place, but there was added minor operations
room
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was added in the
right
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corner.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words right, side, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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