n contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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should have the same and equal opportunities in education. Because of

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, some universities should accept the same

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of male and female students in every subject. I agree that education should be equal for

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think that universities should always accept the exact same number of

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and

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in each course.

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with, equal opportunities are very important in today's

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. In the past,

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did not have the same access and opportunities as

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to study or to have jobs, but now both genders have the opportunity to choose any subject they like or are interested in.

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nowadays

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are starting to study more and more in science or engineering of technological things

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are studying to be a teacher, nursing

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the stereotype is being left behind. Because of

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,

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helps reduce the stereotypes and creates a more fit society

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should be free to decide their interests and their futures.

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, forcing schools to accept the same number of

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and

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could not be fair, since the admissions would depend on the genders

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of skills, effort and grades.

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more students of one

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apply for a career,

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nowadays

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nowadays,

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more

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are applying to psychology and in some

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people could be left out because

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are missing

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they aren't the same amount as

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.

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would be really unconsidered in any subject and with any

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.

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, I strongly believe that boys and girls should have equal rights in education

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however

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universities should focus on fairness

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of making a strict decision to have the same

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of each

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in every career. Equality means giving

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the same chances

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being forced to be the same

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according

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to your

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.