The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart provides information about four different reasons that made people move to the capital of one of the countries in the span of 15 years, starting in the year 2000 up to 2015.
Overall
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, the most common contributors to changing a place of residency
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were seeking employment and studies;
in contrast
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, moving out because of adventure or family members and friends showed the lowest scores.
According to
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the data, persuading a job was the most frequent reason for living in the capital city, up until 2010's when it started to slightly decline, standing at approximately 88000 in the year 2015.
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, the second most common cause was studying, which throughout the whole period of time
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experienced a gradual escalation, reaching its peak at around 88000 (the same number as employment).
On the other hand
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, people who move to be with friends and family,
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those who are looking for adventures, are the
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minority. The former group increased moderately from 12000 at the start to almost 25000 by the end,
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the latter group rose unnoticeably, with only a 5000 difference after one and a half decades.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • relocation
  • capital city
  • significant trends
  • statistics
  • notable reasons
  • comparison
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • popularity
  • paraphrase
  • outline
  • emphasize
  • highlighting
  • incorporating
  • optional
  • surprising trends
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