The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagram shows each part of
frog's
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the frog's
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life cycle in their natural habitat.
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,
subject's
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the subject's
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process of growing up can be
seperated
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separated
by
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into
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eleven different stages, from hatching out of the egg to becoming a fully matured adult frog. At the beginning,
layed
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laid
eggs gradually
tranform
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transform
into so-called embryos. After some time,
teadpoles
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tadpoles
hatch out from their previous form, and since they are yet unable to swim on their own, they tend to cling to water-plants.
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, young ones start to develop new parts of their body.
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Firstly
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externall
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external
gills are being formed for breathing, which are followed by
growing
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the growing
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tail and
appearance
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the appearance
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of the
hindlegs
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hind legs
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. From that point on, half-way matured
speciments
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specimens
store food in their tails for later consumption.
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, after a
while
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front legs start to grow out, and after that
stage
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stage,
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their
taile
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tail
becomes significantly shorter. Not only that, the subject's skin becomes a more
saturized
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saturated
green
color
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colour
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compared to the dark, almost black shade at the beginning. In the
last
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two
stages
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stages,
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the tail
completly
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completely
disappear
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disappears
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, eyes appear to be larger,
as well as
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their whole body, and some bumps pop up.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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