You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. •Describe your purchase order of this book •Explain the importance of the book •Say what you want the company to do for you

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to enquire about my recent purchase of a book online from your website.

To begin

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with, I ordered an “IELTS-7” book online

last

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Sunday, and the order number is # 3462813. I have opted for the normal delivery mode as the fastest delivery costs half of the book price. With that, it was expected to be delivered by

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Monday. I have already booked the exam date and laid a proper preparation schedule. Actually, I have very limited time to prepare, and a delay in receiving the material is affecting my plan. Worth mentioning is,

this

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test is very crucial for me to score grade A, or else my citizenship status will be in trouble.

Consequently

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, it is very critical for me to receive the shipment by Monday;

otherwise

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, all my efforts will be futile. So, I request the shipping team to work with the courier department and find the reason for the delay.

Additionally

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, expedite the delivery of shipments in Fast-track mode. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Vishally Bhardwaj

vishally.bhardwaj

Feb 13, 2026

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task

Make one clear ask in one line about the late delivery and what you want done.

content

Keep only facts that help your goal and cut extra details that do not help.

style

Use simple, clear words and easy links like and, also, then.

tone

The letter is polite and formal in tone.

content

It gives order number and date to find the order.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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