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Many societies believed that face to face classes will not be applicable in the 2050. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Most people believe that in
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2050
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 will not attend
on
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presence
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tought
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thought
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face to
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face
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classes
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 are not
replaceble
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replaceable
. In my
opinion
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 physical
presence
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 is fundamental for both
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 the student and the teacher. During
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classes
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 there is a more direct interaction with the professor, and
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higher
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 too.
On the other hand
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, inside each class, a direct interaction with other
student
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students
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 plays a pivotal role in the learning process, in order to achieve better results during the examinations. For
istance
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instance
, during class attendance, students can share their skills helping
other
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ones
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colleagues
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 to understand some concepts that
could
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be not
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 easy for their
collegues
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colleagues
. In the
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, they can ask for some explanations if something is not clear.
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, online
classes
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 are somehow
irreplaceble
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irreplaceable
. Oppositely, in many cases, students
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able
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 to attend
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 if they are sick or far from their school. In all these cases, online
classes
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 are the only way to
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presence
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 during the courses.
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Covid-19
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pandemia
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,
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face to
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face
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classes
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 are not the only option to guarantee students'
presence
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 during
lessons
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. It can be concluded that
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lessons
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 good option in all cases of necessity
but
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,
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 still
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 the gold standard during the learning process.

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task response
Say your view clearly in the first part and keep it clear as you go.
structure
Plan with an intro, a few body parts, and a short finish.
content
Add more real ideas and facts to back points.
cohesion
Link ideas with simple join words like and, but, also, because.
grammar
Check grammar and sentence form; some long or wrong sentences may confuse readers.
language
Watch spelling and full stops to avoid big mistakes.
content
You show a clear view and talk about both sides.
analysis
You use a real reason to look at online and in class.
structure
There is a closing line that sums up.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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