The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady.

The given graph shows the changes in the crime rates in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.
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these three categories had a fluctuation during the given
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, burglary experienced a significant drop
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the other two categories, which are car theft and robbery, stayed the similar figures
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. Looking at the graph more closely, burglary started at 3500 in 2010 and reached a peak of 3800 in 2011.
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it gradually dropped until 2015, before it experienced a fluctuation. Meanwhile, car theft and robbery started at 2800 and 600 , respectively , but these two categories' figures stayed the same as at the beginning of the
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at 2800 and 600 in 2019.
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, car theft experienced a considerable fall by 800
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2000 in 2013, and after that it started to recover its number of crime cases.

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