The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The data provides a comparison between the university sports court in 1990 and in its current state.
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sports court has received many changes over the years, including a building being constructed on top of the area, where the outdoor pool and fitness centre used to reside. The outdoor pool became an indoor pool
as a result
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, and tennis courts were moved to the area where car parking was. Inside of building, the cafe and reception kept they’re places
while
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the changing area was expanded and moved to the right.
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, the was a construction of a fitness centre right underneath the changing rooms.
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outside, the park had been taken down
with
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, with
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a baseball court erected on top of it.
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, not to forget the tennis courts that were moved to car parking spots, received an increase in the number of fields, going from two tennis courts to four.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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