The table shows information about the numbers of people who took the seven most popular airlines in the US in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provided gives data about how many people used the seven most popular
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with
growth
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rate
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in America from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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, all
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showed
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over time.
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, JetBlue
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'
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was eightfold than the
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rate
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of United
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. Meanwhile, Delta
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showed the most increase in the number of airline users. Looking at the table more closely, one can see that Delta
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soared to 1million users over the period, which showed 113%
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rate
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.
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, United
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rose by 100,000 to 400,000 with the lowest
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rate
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: 33%.
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, Southwest
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showed the second largest number of customers at 400,000 in 1995 and rose by 240,000, it represented the second lowest
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rate
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: 60%. The
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, which had a fewer number of customers in 1995, namely Hawaiian
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and JetBlue airways, represented higher
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rate
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: 150% and 249%, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words airlines, growth, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 8 times.
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