In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

From a perspective, most people will no longer have interest in printed magazines or
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because they will be
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of finding
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everything they want online for free. Based on what I have witnessed throughout my life, I strongly agree with
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opinion. First of all, the progress in technology that people have achieved over the
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ten years is extremely meaningful. In
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case, AI has been developed to a point where it can replace some
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jobs. Considering
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fact, obviously, it can help you with finding some
books
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or news on the internet even if you are not able to.
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, recently, I have been looking for a book about calculus using AI,
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of going to a store and buying it. Despite its cost of 100 pounds, I downloaded it for free, so I saved a lot of money and time.
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, you should have a lot of space to store your printed
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, if you are reading information or a book on a website, you don't have to waste your house space on preserving it.
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, you have a lot of space in your computer for your e-
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that you can use. So,
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is much more convenient than having printed ones.
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, there will always be even a small part of the population with enthusiasm related to printed
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or newspapers.
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type of person enjoys perceiving a smell from
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or the feeling of touching
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.
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, my mother loves some
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like Harry Potter and Deathly Hallows because of their smell, even though she has downloaded versions of them. But, she
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prefers not to spend a fortune on
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which have free internet access. In conclusion, people who use
books
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only for reading will be using only e-
books
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in the near future because of their convenience.
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, a tiny part of the population will still be using printed versions.

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task
Your view is clear, but ideas are not strong or many enough.
task
Add 2-3 big reasons with one clear example for each.
structure
Clear position and some good ideas about space and ease of use.
content
You give a simple plan with three parts (opinion, reasons, conclusion).
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example
Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital technology
  • accessibility
  • printed materials
  • environmental impact
  • tangibility
  • aesthetics
  • sensory experience
  • demographics
  • market trends
  • interactive content
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