The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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The two maps illustrate the comparison between
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layout and
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state of the village
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Ryemouth after three decades of construction. In general, the village has undergone a major development throughout the period, with the alteration and replacement
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the southern and eastern side being the highlight.
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, some facilities
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removed permanently,
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port,
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the forest
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park, and
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the farmland
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. In the northern part of the town, a few housing
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added
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a highway was built leading
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westward, which
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access to the new residential zone.
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farmland and forest park in the eastern part that once occupied a large area had been diminished,
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replaced with a golf
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and two tennis courts. Concerning
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the southern direction, a significant modernisation can be seen. The shop block were coverted to be restaurants,
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the fish market, which was located
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the opposite side, had been replaced by some block of flats.
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, the fishing port was completely diminished.
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, maintaining their locations, a hotel and a cafe
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the same.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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