The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The two maps provide information about the transformation of Ryemouth village from 1995
until
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to
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present
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the present
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.
Overall
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, there
are
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is
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a significant change in order to replace and add new facilities of the town, particularly
on
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in
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the commercial, housing, and sports
.
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sectors.
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, green spaces are deforested
and
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some buildings stay the same. Looking at the north-west of the town, a new house has been built
as well as
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a residential road in the recent period,
which
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where
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are there
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there are
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more houses along the roads than in the past. At the same time, with regard to the eastern part, the farmlands and the forest parks are completely diminished to build a new golf field and two tennis courts. Moving to the southern part of the town
which
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has
been
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experienced a noticeable change, shopping areas are replaced by several restaurants and
fishing
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the fishing
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market is transformed into four flats,
while
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fishing
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the fishing
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port on the sea is fully removed.
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, the cafe maintains no change
and
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a new car park has been built
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the right side of the hotel.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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