The two maps below show a housing estate now,and how it will look after redevelopment

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The two maps compare the current layout of the housing estate with its planned reconstruction.

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, housing

estate

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estates

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will become more

bult-up

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built-up

town

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towns

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basically

due to

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the changes like expansion of roads and

urbanization

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urbanisation

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. At present, the housing estate cannot be considered as

developed

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a developed

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town, since houses, green spaces and

road

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roads

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are the only things existing here. The

greeneries

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cover

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the whole area, creating a fascinating view of the forest from every house, since apartments are

also

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not situated as a bunch. The access that

road

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the road

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can offer is very limited, only allowing

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one to

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drive around several houses. The proposed redevelopment, a large part of

green

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the green

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zones will be demolished in order

for

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apply

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the

construction

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planned facilities

such

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lake

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a lake

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tennis

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court and

flower

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garden. The flower garden is planned to act as a focal point, connecting all the accommodations as they

all will

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locate

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around the flower garden. A great development of

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the roads

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roads

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road

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system will take place, planning to see the results in the form of

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apply

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increased accessibility. There will

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also be

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also

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a parking area in the very south of the town.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

185 words

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The two maps below show a housing estate now,and how it will look after redevelopment

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dresscode. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?