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The current exam system is the best and the better is not found yet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The present means of assessment has been argued to be inferior
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 a more effective strategy is yet to be discovered. I completely disagree with
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how students tend to
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 exams. One of the main reasons I disagree with
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times
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, people
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 do not possess applicable knowledge or skills
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relevant
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 situations.
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, implementing a structure where the answers to an assessment require critical thinking can be helpful in ensuring that tests adequately challenge the
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 of students.
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, it would take very detailed and carefully
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 questions to achieve
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. Another important point to consider is how examinations are seen as the end goal
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 of the knowledge and learning aspect in education.
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,
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 takers are found to place more relevance on the
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 itself, when the focus should be on the course in question.
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, a group of students have a Chemistry
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 on a specific topic. They would go out to seek past questions on the
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 when they should be
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assimilating
 and absorbing the information on said topic. In conclusion, I believe the present mode of exam is not the best
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 there is improvement to be made, because of how much it downplays the
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Task response
Make your view clear in the first line and stay on it through the essay.
Language
Use simple, correct words and fix small grammar errors to help read.
Content
Add more plain ideas and easy examples to prove your view.
Coherence
Link ideas from one to the next so the writing flows well.
Organization
Use one idea per sentence or two, and keep sentences short.
Strength
Clear stance on the topic.
Strength
Some good ideas about intent of exams and use of examples.
Strength
Attempts to discuss both sides and give a conclusion.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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