The table gives us information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table compares the growth of the
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of technology experts in five particular countries between 2003 and 2007, in terms of per million people. In general, Poland consistently recorded
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considerable
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of researchers throughout the period.
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, Turkey showed the most significant growth,
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three other nations saw relatively modest changes in their figures. In detail, Poland remained the leading country in terms of research capacity
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, their
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fell noticeably, forming 285 in 2003 to 226 by 2007. Mexico
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employed a relatively large
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of researchers,
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147
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rose dramatically to 242 by 2003, which
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surpassed
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,
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their
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went down to 183 in the final year. In comparison, Moldova and Turkey began with much smaller research communities. For that matter, Moldova experienced a fractional rise, recruiting merely 11 new experts in five years. Turkey,
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, reported
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sharper incline, more than doubling
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their initial
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in the
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year.
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, Togo had the lowest figures among the five countries, showing a minor surge in 2005 before decreasing gradually to return
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2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • country
  • countries
  • people
  • work
  • as
  • researchers
  • technology
  • per
  • million
  • highest
  • lowest
  • more
  • less
  • than
  • difference
  • gap
  • similar
  • different
  • compare
  • pattern
  • overall
  • data
  • show
  • indicate
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