You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: describe the problem say how long it has been a problem explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my discomfort

due to

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the constant noise from your apartment 101 at level 7. Regarding the problem, the constantly loud music sounds and chatter after 10 PM have made it uncomfortable and difficult for us. I want to bring

this

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to your attention that

such

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activities have made it uneasy for

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apply

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and

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the other neighbours. After clearly communicating that I had to face loss of sleep and attention,

this

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problem has been persisting for three weeks now , right after you moved in , and it is unacceptable after we told you about it several times to date. I want you to consider all the neighbours residing in the building and lower the noise to a minimum , or else we would have no other choice but to complain about it to the building committee. I hope you resolve the problem soon. Regards, Alex Shaff

shrestharaman143

Feb 27, 2026

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task response

Be clear about what you want the neighbour to do. For example: ask them to keep noise down after 10 PM.

coherence

Put one main idea in each paragraph and use simple links like 'and', 'also', 'but' to connect ideas.

tone

Keep a polite and firm tone. Avoid saying you will complain unless needed. Suggest a next step.

content

Clear description of the problem and the time it occurs.

aim

The action you want is stated.

form

Greeting and closing are present.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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