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Too much emphasis is placed on testing these days, which puts pressure on teachers and students. Do you agree or disagree?

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, there is an overload of extensive testing which may cause a
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great pressure
 on both instructors and
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. I agree that having many
exams
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 can cause a huge stress for both of them. On
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the one hand, instructors have a lot of marking tasks and revisions to prepare their
students
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 for the exam.
On the other hand
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,
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worry
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 their academic grading. Starting with instructors,
in addition
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 to their teaching
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 they will have testing duties.
This
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 will include preparing their
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 before the exam with extensive revision
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 their
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students
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 achievement might affect their own evaluation.
That is
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 to say that many educational institutions evaluate the skills of their teaching staff
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 on the achievements of the
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 throughout the semester. Another overwhelming task is the evaluation of the
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students
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 exam papers. Having too many
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 will make
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 time and
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.
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,
instructirs wil
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instructors will
 be
continiously
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continuously
 stressed over the academic year. Moving to the second party,
students
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 will be in consistence anxiety over their GPA. They will focus on securing marks by focusing on
menorizing
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memorising
 answers for tests.
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students
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 creativity and confidence. They will accept answers as they are without having
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critical thinking during their learning process.
To sum up
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,
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 are
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 essential academic pillar to measure outcomes
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and achievements
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.
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, having numerous
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 would have a negative effect on both the educators and learners
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task
In the intro, say your view clearly and outline the points you will discuss.
coherence
Each paragraph should start with a clear topic sentence and stay on one idea.
content
Give specific, real examples to back your points.
language
Check spellings and grammar to make your meaning clear.
content
The argument is clear: exams can cause stress for teachers and students.
structure
There is some use of linking words like 'on the one hand' to show balance.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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