The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The illustration demonstrates the production of Olive

Oil

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from

fruit

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picking to storage and sale.

Overall

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, the process begins

by

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the harvest of olive

fruit

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from the tree and ends with the storage and sale of the

oil

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produced. The manufacturing of Olive

Oil

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involves a

7 steps

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7-step

process before reaching consumers.

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, olive

fruit

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gets picked by the farmers in bulk,

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it gets rinsed in cold water before going through the belt to dry off. The olives

then

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get smashed, the process that would separate the

fruit

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into olive paste and olive stones. The

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four steps involve packaging the olive paste and olive stones in a bag with holes to prepare

it

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for being pressed down to separate the

oil

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from the water.

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is a very crucial step to ensure that the separation has been done properly in order for the final product to be packaged and

send

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sent

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out

to

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for

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sale and storage.