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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.

The table provides information about the annual
milk
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production
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 in four countries (the
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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 and Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010, measured in
litres
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.
Overall
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, the
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 produced far more
milk
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 than the other two countries throughout the period.
While
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milk
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production
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 in
Tanzania
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 and Guatemala increased steadily,
Australia
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 experienced a noticeable decline by 2010. The
Netherlands
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,
however
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, remained relatively stable and the largest producer. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 produced 11,262,000
litres
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 of
milk
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, and
this
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 figure stayed fairly stable over the following years, reaching 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010.
Similarly
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,
Australia
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 produced a high amount of
milk
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 at 11,246,000
litres
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 in 1990,
although
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this
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 number fell gradually to 11,105,000
litres
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 in 2000 and
then
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 dropped more significantly to 9,165,000
litres
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 in 2010.
In contrast
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,
milk
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production
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 in
Tanzania
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 and Guatemala was considerably lower, but both countries showed steady growth.
Tanzania
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 increased its
production
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 from 87,000
litres
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 in 1990 to 142,000
litres
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 in 2000, before reaching 155,000
litres
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 in 2010.
Likewise
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, Guatemala’s
production
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 rose consistently from 26,000
litres
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 to 55,000
litres
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, and eventually to 84,000
litres
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 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, netherlands, australia, tanzania, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • milk
  • year
  • country
  • increase
  • rise
  • grow
  • climb
  • gain
  • up
  • down
  • decrease
  • fall
  • drop
  • decline
  • steady
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • significant
  • slight
  • rapid
  • dramatic
  • highest
  • lowest
  • most
  • least
  • more than
  • less than
  • as much as
  • in 1990
  • in 2000
  • in 2010
  • over the period
  • for each year
  • the table shows
  • compare
  • difference
  • gap
  • trend
  • pattern
  • overall
  • paraphrase
  • data
  • value
  • amount
  • level
  • than
  • than
  • whereas
  • while
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