The charts illustrate that the eligibility of graduates at a company of engineering in 1980 and 2008.

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the eligibility of graduates

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company of engineering

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1980 and 2008.  In the pie charts, the

master

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science

made up the largest part of

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in 1980

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the workforce eligibility

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was the largest part

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different

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was the lowest proportion in 1980

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it was the lowest one too in 2008.  In the pie

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, in 1980, the

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degree

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students

reached 29%, which was the largest one and followed by the

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degree

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(25%). The

rate

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of the

first

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degree

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sciences(20%) was 10 times

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that of

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art

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(2%)

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the same time, the ratio of the

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(13%) was larger than that of

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degree

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(11%). In 2008, the

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enrollment

increased a lot(30%), which

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(29%). The

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declined a little(11%)

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to 10%. The proportion of

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degree

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increased

a little to 7% and 13%. In the table, it can obviously get the change of the six different

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. The change of the

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science

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the largest (7%). And the

rate

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of

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science

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