The chart above shows the number of homes built between 2000 and 2009 in two cities, Derby and Nottingham.

The histogram

illustate

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illustrates

the number of

houses

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built from 2000 to 2009 in

Derby

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and Nottingham.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

amout

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amount

of building

home

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homes

show examples

for both cities

Verb problem

has

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incresed

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increased

during

nine-year

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the nine-year

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studied

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study

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However

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However,

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Derby

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is almost

regolary

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regular

in their

grow

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growth

show examples

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apply

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insted Nottingam

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instead Nottingham

has irregular development. First of all,

it is clear that

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Derby

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was growth

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grew

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during the time

analyzed

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analysed

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. The major

develpment

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development

of the city was in 2009 when it

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apply

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achived

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achieved

around 350 new

houses

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built. In

2000

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2000,

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there

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was

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a minimum

with

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50 new homes

erect

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erected

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. In between there is a constant

grow

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growth

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afer

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after

2003, in

this

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year

Derby

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was

build

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built

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around 100 new

buildgs

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buildings

for domestic usage

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. This

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this

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value

remain

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remains

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costant

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constant

since 2007. In 2008

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show examples

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it went

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up to around 380.

Focussing

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Focusing

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on Nottingham

the

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, the

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maximum rate was

achived

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achieved

in 2009

whit

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with

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230

houses

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built, the minimum

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was

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duringe

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2006

whit

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with

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10 new

building

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buildings

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. The

grow

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growth

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for

this

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city is almost

irregura

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irregular

rather

Darby

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than Darby

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insted

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instead

remain

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remaining

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les

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less

developed.

In addition

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, only in 2007 Nottingham

has

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had

show examples

houses

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(180) rather Darby (110)

alessandra.pizzuti1

Mar 8, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, derby with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
45
Grammar mistakes
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

176 words

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