Nowadays, as a part of education process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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process, students are engaged in a company for

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internship

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without income.

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my point of

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it is important for young

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have

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the opportunity to

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gain

owork

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work

experience

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in a company

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furthermore

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some

time

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this

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these students

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after

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an internship

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internship

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employee

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represent

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a great opportunity.

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for free. One of the main advantages of internships is that they allow students to gain practical

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in a real

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environment.

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enormous

value for recent graduate because it

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helps

them have their first contact with

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colleagues

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professional networking.

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experience

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in a real

industial

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can increase future job opportunities and

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help

student

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understand their interest and the professional field in which they may perform best.

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may be unfair

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for young

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who need financial independence. Not all

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student

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students

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efford

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afford

work

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especially

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career prospects. From my point of view, unpaid

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not

accetable

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acceptable

in our

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society

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inequity and

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discrimination

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student

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students

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extremely

valuable for

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student

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students

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because

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practical

experience

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, the duration

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should

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companies

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should

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Mar 9, 2026

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task response

Answer the main question more clearly all through the essay. Say if the good points are more than the bad points, and keep this same view in each part.

task response

Add one or two clear examples to support your ideas, such as travel cost, food cost, or a student who gets a job after training.

coherence and cohesion

Make each main idea easier to follow. Start each body part with one clear point, then explain it in simple steps.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words in a careful way, such as 'First', 'Also', 'However', and 'In conclusion'. This will help the essay flow better.

coherence and cohesion

Check word forms and sentence building because some parts are hard to understand, and this hurts both meaning and flow.

task response

You answer both sides of the topic and give your own view.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay has a clear start, two body parts, and an ending.

task response

The main ideas are relevant to the topic, such as work experience, future jobs, and unfair free work.

Fully explain your ideas

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

real-world experience
soft skills
networking opportunities
workplace culture
career exploration
professional relationships
academic knowledge
theoretical application
job market
head start
industry connections
unpaid internship
employability
practical experience
individual development

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