he graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The chart illustrates the
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of visitors on a special Caribbean island
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7 years. 
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structure, it is readily apparent that amount of visitors on a Caribbean island had come during 7 years, showed the highest point.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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