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Band 3.5

The bar chart below shows the daily average hours of teachers spent on five different tasks during a typical week.

The bar chart below shows the daily average times
of
Change preposition
that
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 teachers
spent
Wrong verb form
spend
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 on five different tasks during a typical week.
Overall
Linking Words
on
Punctuation problem
, on
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 a day teaching
is take
Wrong verb form
takes
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 3.5
hours
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Punctuation problem
. morover
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Correct your spelling
Moreover
morover
Punctuation problem
morover,
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 the lesson preparation
get
Verb problem
takes
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 3 and
metings
Use the right word
meetings
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is
Verb problem
apply
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take between 2 and 2.5
proably
Correct your spelling
probably
take
Wrong verb form
takes
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 2.15
hours
Use synonyms
Punctuation problem
. However
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however
Linking Words
 the supervising students is decraes to between 2
hours
Use synonyms
 and
increase
Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
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1.5
Change preposition
to 1.5
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the
Fix capitalization
The
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last
Linking Words
 chart shows
is
Verb problem
apply
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the minor chart
Punctuation problem
. In
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in addition
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 the fall of them
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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take between 1 hour
also
Linking Words
 1.5
hours
Use synonyms

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 93%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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