The two spatial diagrams illustrate how
the
Norbiton City is modernised, with the first map Correct article usage
apply
demonstrates
the present layout as an industrial zone, Wrong verb form
demonstrating
while
the latter displays the redevelopment plan.
In general, it is apparent that the city will be changed significantly, with an upgraded public facility Linking Words
will
be constructed. Wrong verb form
to
Moreover
, in the future, the factories will Linking Words
completely be
replaced by the housing area.
Taking a closer look, it can be observed that the south-east area is predicted to Correct word order
be completely
be undergone
a major modernisation, which will Verb problem
undergo
be added
various public services, Verb problem
include
such
as Linking Words
playground
, a school, and the original factories are going to be replaced by Correct article usage
a playground
the
housing blocks. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, a health centre and a commercial will be built near the roundabout, Linking Words
as well as
the new residential zones.
Linking Words
However
, altering markedly, an improved motorway is another key feature, which Linking Words
estimated
to be expanded to the north Verb problem
is estimated
site
of the stream Check wording
side
and
an additional small roundabout will Punctuation problem
, and
also
be paved. Linking Words
Likewise
, a road crossing the river is planned to be constructed, heading to the agriculture field and the new farmland house.Linking Words