The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the alteration in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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, the percentage of households which use refrigerator surging and

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slowed between 1920 and 1980, by contras washing machines, which has fluctuation on the same level throughout the period. In 1920, the proportion of households with a vacuum cleaner grew steadily and reached

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highest point in 2000,

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the figure of hours of housework decreased steadily and receded lowest point during the same period. In conclusion, it is evident that when electrical appliances became most common, the number of hours of housework went down steadily at the same time.

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