The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
the
Fix capitalization
The
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two maps given to us
gives
Correct subject-verb agreement
give
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us a clear view of
changes
Correct article usage
the changes
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happened between 2000 and today.
Linking Words
this
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This
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map shows the new buildings added to the whole
maps
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map
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and
also
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the quality of life changes to the landscape

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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